The worlds idea is cool, the large image gives a strong vocal point. I'd make the headlines a little bigger than the program name though. Maybe add a small one sentence line as to what the program does.
I think that' you're doing agreat job so far...its hard to to make images of sound and motion, rather than light which can be so literal like the sun... but so far i think you're doing great..i really like the images on your ad..i think you should go with those=) good job
the ad dimensions were 10/x16 which i dont believe these sketches were created, but... i like the proportions so i would advise that maybe you create your ads either in this letterbox form in the 10x16 or create the ads slightly less tall.
good layout, interested to see actual digital form
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The worlds idea is cool, the large image gives a strong vocal point. I'd make the headlines a little bigger than the program name though. Maybe add a small one sentence line as to what the program does.
-Paul
I feel like you may need stronger images. The icons on your packaging are nice, why don't you incorporate them on the ad in some way.
I think that' you're doing agreat job so far...its hard to to make images of sound and motion, rather than light which can be so literal like the sun... but so far i think you're doing great..i really like the images on your ad..i think you should go with those=) good job
the ad dimensions were 10/x16 which i dont believe these sketches were created, but... i like the proportions so i would advise that maybe you create your ads either in this letterbox form in the 10x16 or create the ads slightly less tall.
good layout, interested to see actual digital form
joe
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