It looks good overall, very clean and sophisticated, it looks like contemporary Japanese design. Adding the grain is a nice touch. I think the type on the box carrier can be arranged more interesting though.
It looks great. Maybe you can add more grain onto the carrier. I feel like there is too much negative space there. Overall, its good though. Good Job. :]
Smart aesthetic decisions (the bottle when in or out of the pack. I would change the arrangement on the pack carrier. Currently all of the elements in the silver area are resting on the same level, try staggering them.
Your packaging looks great. If I were to change anything, it would be the layout on the carrier pack. I think it could be more interesting, it looks a little static right now.
as for the design it is already at it fulless so dont change anything anymore. the packaging is great your work is great dude are you giving us some sample after it finished some morning sun
Great work. I really like the design and color used for everything. Looks very clean and sophisticated. I like how you play with the angle of the A in Asahi with the labels as well as in the packaging. Good stuff.
Very good work. It looks appealing and carries a very cultivated, yet at the same time traditional characteristic to it that does not change the product completely but simply redefines it in a modern fashion. Wow... too deep. Sorry. A few suggestions are to focus on a single logo on the carrier design, as opposed to putting the icon and the type logo side by side, and also to try some cool stuff with the gradients on there as well. I really would not change anything on the bottle.
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It looks good overall, very clean and sophisticated, it looks like contemporary Japanese design. Adding the grain is a nice touch. I think the type on the box carrier can be arranged more interesting though.
-Paul
It looks great. Maybe you can add more grain onto the carrier. I feel like there is too much negative space there. Overall, its good though. Good Job. :]
-Jenny
i really like your design to be honest i wouldn't change anything! great JOB!!!!!!
-rosa
Smart aesthetic decisions (the bottle when in or out of the pack. I would change the arrangement on the pack carrier. Currently all of the elements in the silver area are resting on the same level, try staggering them.
Your packaging looks great. If I were to change anything, it would be the layout on the carrier pack. I think it could be more interesting, it looks a little static right now.
fantastic. thats all i gotta say. i want an asahi now
as for the design it is already at it fulless so dont change anything anymore. the packaging is great your work is great dude are you giving us some sample after it finished some morning sun
Great work. I really like the design and color used for everything. Looks very clean and sophisticated. I like how you play with the angle of the A in Asahi with the labels as well as in the packaging. Good stuff.
Very good work. It looks appealing and carries a very cultivated, yet at the same time traditional characteristic to it that does not change the product completely but simply redefines it in a modern fashion. Wow... too deep. Sorry. A few suggestions are to focus on a single logo on the carrier design, as opposed to putting the icon and the type logo side by side, and also to try some cool stuff with the gradients on there as well. I really would not change anything on the bottle.
I like your color choice. It looks very elegant/sophisticated.
The two marks next to the "a" logo is distracting. I think that the "a" alone would work for the logo.
Your text on the bottom looks skewed and jumbled up.
Nice work overall, but I think the type placement on the package need some more work. Color choses are beautiful.
-Helen
I really like what you have so far, especially the carrier. I like how the look of the carrier becomes a part of the design on the bottles.
Sarom R.
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