I am not really sure how the designs represent Russia. I do like the red design that kind of looks like a flower, but it might look good if you flip it over and made it out to be like a torch (just a thought) Good fonts though, it goes well with the delicate nature of your designs.
I would select #13 or #14, I prefer #14 because it's simple, yet catches the eye, when you see this logo you think moscow. Number #13 is clever as well, but if you had a choice go with #14.
#6 is my favorite simple yet interesting... the blue graphic representing the round top towers there, the color blue it's in thier flag, nice hierachy, the whole logo has a nice overall look very clean all the elements are there, the graphic suggest movement as well, olympics are all about movement so i think this one is a nice mark... you work hard on the other ones as well but i like this one we all have different taste
I like #7. I like how you played with the type...but the one thing way I didn't see was Moscow 2016 and the olympic rings under that. I think that might work out even better then the way the type is laid out currently on #7. I like #11 the type is creative on that but it would not work with the the #7 design element. I think I would also like the intensity of the color to be increased, more "punchy". It seems to soft for the olympics games. Overall, Good job! Good luck deciding you have a lot of ideas. I went through that.
The designs are supposed to be the top of the Kremlin, right? That's what I see anyway. I like the design in #7 and #13. I would play more with your font choices and placement. Maybe on #13 moving Moscow closer to the mark would make it feel more cohesive. The Kremlin is also very colorful, I would try brighter colors, maybe even 2 different colors in #7 to bring in the look of it even more.
I was immediately drawn to number two, I really like it but I don';t think it fits for the Olympics (but great design!) and I also like number ten. I like the color, the placement of the rings and text. Great designs.
I like the logo of 6 the best and the text placement of 14. For some reason that one is more obvious that it's the top of the kremlin than the others to me. The type from 14 looks good with the "Moscow" being thicker than the year. The font is working really well.
I like Number 3, 4, and 5. The shapes and colors combine to represent Russia. I think the design on #3 looks good but you should also try the mark without the graduation to make it look sharp and clean. I also suggest placing the type at the bottom just like you did with #4.
You know what, I can't even decide... I know I would go with one of the graphics you did as opposed to just the type. But they're all pretty cool to me, I really just don't have anything to say but those are cool, lol. sorry.
As far as colors i like number 3 but the readability is not there so try some different layouts. Its okay that some people might not realize its the kremlin but ambiguity is good and its contemporary.
I really like number 4, I think that is going to be a very succesful logo, I like the colors you used and the idea also. I would not change anything I really liked it!
i really like your design especially #13, 14, 15, .... that kind of design.. i think those would work the best.... with a nice gradient like u did it would look very eye catching.... i dont think the type works on the side or vertically as it is a little hard to read.... leave it in the bottom.... good job... very delicate and fine designs
you are very close with the overlapping transparent elements from the left side of your page.
#6 and #4 work, but think about the size of your type. try printing them out in various sizes to see the refinements needed in regards to the type relationship to icon.
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I am not really sure how the designs represent Russia. I do like the red design that kind of looks like a flower, but it might look good if you flip it over and made it out to be like a torch (just a thought) Good fonts though, it goes well with the delicate nature of your designs.
Rachel F
I would select #13 or #14, I prefer #14 because it's simple, yet catches the eye, when you see this logo you think moscow. Number #13 is clever as well, but if you had a choice go with #14.
#6 is my favorite simple yet interesting... the blue graphic representing the round top towers there, the color blue it's in thier flag, nice hierachy, the whole logo has a nice overall look very clean all the elements are there, the graphic suggest movement as well, olympics are all about movement so i think this one is a nice mark...
you work hard on the other ones as well but i like this one we all have different taste
I like #7. I like how you played with the type...but the one thing way I didn't see was Moscow 2016 and the olympic rings under that. I think that might work out even better then the way the type is laid out currently on #7. I like #11 the type is creative on that but it would not work with the the #7 design element. I think I would also like the intensity of the color to be increased, more "punchy". It seems to soft for the olympics games.
Overall, Good job! Good luck deciding you have a lot of ideas. I went through that.
Kimberly Jensen
The designs are supposed to be the top of the Kremlin, right? That's what I see anyway. I like the design in #7 and #13. I would play more with your font choices and placement. Maybe on #13 moving Moscow closer to the mark would make it feel more cohesive. The Kremlin is also very colorful, I would try brighter colors, maybe even 2 different colors in #7 to bring in the look of it even more.
Erin C.
I was immediately drawn to number two, I really like it but I don';t think it fits for the Olympics (but great design!) and I also like number ten. I like the color, the placement of the rings and text. Great designs.
Jenn Chafin
I like the logo of 6 the best and the text placement of 14. For some reason that one is more obvious that it's the top of the kremlin than the others to me. The type from 14 looks good with the "Moscow" being thicker than the year. The font is working really well.
Dexter Bendicion
I like Number 3, 4, and 5. The shapes and colors combine to represent Russia. I think the design on #3 looks good but you should also try the mark without the graduation to make it look sharp and clean. I also suggest placing the type at the bottom just like you did with #4.
You know what, I can't even decide... I know I would go with one of the graphics you did as opposed to just the type. But they're all pretty cool to me, I really just don't have anything to say but those are cool, lol. sorry.
As far as colors i like number 3 but the readability is not there so try some different layouts. Its okay that some people might not realize its the kremlin but ambiguity is good and its contemporary.
Jared Kennedy
I really like number 4, I think that is going to be a very succesful logo, I like the colors you used and the idea also. I would not change anything I really liked it!
i really like your design especially #13, 14, 15, .... that kind of design.. i think those would work the best.... with a nice gradient like u did it would look very eye catching.... i dont think the type works on the side or vertically as it is a little hard to read.... leave it in the bottom.... good job... very delicate and fine designs
Gregory S.
I like number 14. I like the colors in it and I like the design the best. The other ones look a little too Georgia OKeefe.
you are very close with the overlapping transparent elements from the left side of your page.
#6 and #4 work, but think about the size of your type. try printing them out in various sizes to see the refinements needed in regards to the type relationship to icon.
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